#2-“Double Wobbly” story
The “Double Wobbly” Story
Here’s the beginning of the story I wrote called “The Legend of Double Wobbly.”
Twilight had come down fast, darkening the steep roadway. I skated over the top of Ichabod Hill and rolled downward, picking up speed. I could hear dogs in faraway backyards barking and howling at the setting sun. Carving a tight line down the curving road, I shot downhill faster and faster, rapidly approaching the dangerous twists of Double 
Wobbly. Suddenly a wave of bad feeling came over me. It wasn’t fear exactly…more of a strange, demented sadness. I could not continue. I dug in, grinding my board to a stop.
Just at that moment the distant dogs went silent, and a nearby rasp of wheels on pavement caught my ear. I looked uphill. There, concealed in a shadow cast by a dark cloud, a towering figure stood on a glowing skateboard.
My hair rose in terror. Was it the demon of Double Wobbly? Could I outrace this evil? I was fast on my board…but was I fast enough?
At that moment the cloud moved away, and I could see my pursuer.
My heart went cold. The dude on the skateboard had no head!
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I don’t know what comes next. If you have an idea, go for it! Write it up below.
I shivered, this time in fear. OMG.
Then, “Gotcha!” It was June. She was using my invisible mask that makes it look like your head disappear. But, just then, I had a brilliant idea. I cackled, knowing it would earn me some points. Time to put my plan to action!
I ripped off the mask, and just as I planned, June’s head as well. I won the Points Battle!
The mysterious skateboarder revealed a dagger, and used it to chop off my own head. Then we became close friends. I still didn’t know his name… until he introduced himself as Kevin. I screamed and stabbed him. Then I went back to the place where he chopped my head off, glued it back on, and enjoyed life as a kid zombie. Yum, brains.
That is so-o-o gory…and really terrific. I think turning into a zombie is a neat twist!
the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldn’t see that he replaced my head with a pumpkin the not so very end
Neat idea. But if your head was on the boarder, then I think you’d be able to see…and maybe even your brain would now control his body. I don’t know…
It’s your story.
the dude skated over and challenged me to see who is the best skateboarder.I accepted his challenge.
the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldnt see the he replaced my head with a pumpkin the end
Haha! That’s really funny!
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Nice of you to say that, Noah!
I felt as if I would die if I kept running. Finally I had to stop! My doom was coming closer and closer.
Suddenly the dude reached up and PULLED OFF HIS HEAD!!! What was underneath was even more surprising. Georgie!!! “How do you like my Halloween costume Cheesie?” He said.
I didn’t recover from the shock of the experience until Georgie apologized and my breathing was back to normal. I’m never going out after dark again!!!!!
Great surprise ending!
add some kittens and Bob the Builders to your story.
That is weird. I put kittens in book #4! How did you know?
Bob the Builder? No way. It’s for toddlers.
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My heart raced as I threw my skateboard at the mysterious dude. Missed! My feet pounded on the pavement. I was running so fast I couldn’t see. I turned back and he wasne’t there!
Had I outrun him?
BAM! The figure crashed into me! “Get off me,twerp!”he yelled.
IT WAS KEVIN!!! What Kevin did was cheating, so I won the duel!
The End
Good story. I didn’t expect it to be Kevin.
Totally awesome!