The “Double Wobbly” Story

Here’s the beginning of the story I wrote called “The Legend of Double Wobbly.”

Twilight had come down fast, darkening the steep roadway. I skated over the top of Ichabod Hill and rolled downward, picking up speed. I could hear dogs in faraway backyards barking and howling at the setting sun. Carving a tight line down the curving road, I shot downhill faster and faster, rapidly approaching the dangerous twists of Double Illustration of a towering figure on a glowing skateboardWobbly. Suddenly a wave of bad feeling came over me. It wasn’t fear exactly…more of a strange, demented sadness. I could not continue. I dug in, grinding my board to a stop.

Just at that moment the distant dogs went silent, and a nearby rasp of wheels on pavement caught my ear. I looked uphill. There, concealed in a shadow cast by a dark cloud, a towering figure stood on a glowing skateboard.

My hair rose in terror. Was it the demon of Double Wobbly? Could I outrace this evil? I was fast on my board…but was I fast enough?

At that moment the cloud moved away, and I could see my pursuer.

My heart went cold. The dude on the skateboard had no head!


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  1. The weapon for the duel should have been a bb gun or ak-47 to have more action. I love your books though

    1. My publisher (and my Mom!!!) would DEFINITELY not agree to an AK-47…or even a BB gun. I’m glad you like the books, however.

  2. The blood gushed and his stomach was sliced both of his bones shattered.

    Sad story

  3. Chapter ??
    What the heck? No head? Now I was really creeped out. What was even more horrendous was that the dude could speak! “Hello, Ichabod Crane.” I gasped. How did he know my name? “Yes, Crane. I know your name. I know everyone who skateboards around these parts. And you? You’re on my turf.” And with that, he skateboarded down the hill, picking up speed. I turned on my heel and began skateboarding, too. I was almost there. . . “Gotcha!!!” My world went black.

  4. And he had new some tricks on the skateboard but one day he did the double wobbly and it broke his legs and he crawled away in terror and his head magically appeared and his legs were broke still the end.

  5. The guy started to pull out a AK47 from his side,but because he could not see(no head,duh),he fell over his board,which exploded.Go figure.

  6. The guy started to do the double ,but since he had no head he failed and broke both legs as i scooted away he cried for help…

  7. And of course I thought I was delusional but when he came closer he had no head. So I rode as fast as I could but then he was right beside me. He had a saw. Now I don’t have a head and I’m going to have to find one the next kid on ichabod hill might do

  8. I did a flip, then a swerve to the right. He was getting closer, and closer. l tried to do a move l can’t pronounce, and l failed! l was done for. My days were over. This creepy no-headed guy might of been a police who was beheaded so I LOST IN THE POINT BATTLE, even though l was ahead by 50 points!

  9. I looked at the monster in terror! It seemed so huge! I then ran, as fast as i could, but he was gaining on me! Oh no! As he was only inches away i made a sharp turn to the book shop. I ran in even though no one was there. It was weird that the door was open, i wonder why? Then as i was thinking i remembered, wait, oh yeah i am being chased by a monster! I ran rapidly toward a big shelf of books and hid behind it. As i shivered, i heard a noise. It was the demon! I stood there as quiet as i could, i could hear books falling down and the footsteps of the demon. I accidentally made a noise. Oh no! I didn’t mean to do that! The demon growled and walked near where i was standing, suddenly, it walked away! That was a close one! The demon walked out of the store and hopped on its skateboard. Whew! I decided i should follow it, maybe it has been stealing things or kidnapping people! I followed it down a dark alley and i heard barking! About a hundred dogs walked out and headed toward the demon. Then, the demon took off its head! Oh! It was a dog! That’s why it growled! Then all the dogs walked toward me and licked me to death (Not literally!) I shouldn’t have been scared of it! It was just a dog! Oh well! Then i walked home happily and went back to being tortured by goon! HAHA! Just kidding! I went home and it was bedtime so i went to sleep. What an interesting day!

  10. I introspected (means looked USE THIS WORD CHEESIE) at the balrog (means demon) and he was moving straight toward me! I skateboarded off, but he was faster. Then, he caught me, and I had to spend the rest of my life in the dungeon, with only a skeleton to keep me company.

  11. As I looked in terror I finally realized he was
    heading towards my home.I secretly followed him.
    Out in the road there was a pile of skateboards!
    I regonized a few . So that dude was stealing
    skateboards !!

  12. Then out of the breeze came a pumpkin! Then he did the double wobbly except he jumped and he flew he reached for my head, and reached for his pupmkin head and threw it! I tripped and screamed.beep beep beep.

  13. I scampered around, hoping the beast wouldn’t see me. All of a sudden, an eerie, echoing sound rang through my ears. Then, I jumped. Double Wobbly was right behind me, sending shivers up my spine! Suddenly, he attacked, pouncing above me. It would soon be my end…

    “Wake up! You’re going to be late for school!”

  14. I think you should have to run and run as the beast approches you jump out of the way he turns around and you start running and then the cloud is gone and you get into your house and you wake up and it was just a dream.# I HOPE YOU LIKE IT CHEESIE MACK

  15. “double wobbley is chasing me help me please!” I cried nobody was there I was running for my life. I stopped when I though I lost him. Turns out I didn’t loose him. I screamed! I told him “let me go. I am to young to die” he almost got me but I got away. If he got me I would not be writing this right now if u see double wobbley run don’t stop keep going

  16. “It’s the Double wobbly!I’m gonna die!!!!!!” I cried Unfortunetly I couldn’t escape and that was the end of me. Soon I found out the curse. The curse was if you are killed by the Double wobbly you become the Double wobbly. Now I will come to torment you.OH NO I’M CHANGING I’M CHANGING HELP ME HELp Me HElP me Help me help me joiaskchikudjhcx

  17. I was scared out of my mind for sure. No doubt of that; My stomach felt queasy and my heart started up again it currently beating against my chest like a stick hitting a drum. Then I realized that it was getting closer and closer. I did the only thing that came into my mind. I scateboarded for my life! Honestly my pursuer was out of control. He skidded to the left and wiggled to the right. He was fast though! I took a sharp left into a narrow path. If I thought it through it was a dumb idea. I rolled over twigs and leave occasionally hitting a rock here and there. I made a lot of noise and I didn’t even know where I was any more. I turned around the lunatic stopped following me now. I breathed in a sigh of relief-now I had to figure out where in the world I was. I yelled or I thought I did for help. I was so afraid and the only light that guided my way was the moon. It was a full moon so it helped a little. I kept walking in the direction of the path then… I had came to a neighbor hood. To be exact, the neighbor hood I lived in my whole life. My house was in front of me. I opened up the back gate and trotted inside clearly happy I was home again.

  18. I was walking home with my skateboard, then I saw double wobbly. I took off on my skateboard. I took a long pathway with lots of sharp turns and rocks. I picked up some rocks and threw them at double wobbly’s arms (to make him lose balance), his legs (to make him fall off his skateboard), and I took a sharp turn and double wobbly hit a tree and he fell into a lake and stayed there.

  19. Ahead of me was a canyon.”Its my only chance”I thought and picked up speed.That dude is a couple meters behind me.I pull out a mega jump over the canyon.The dude follows but hit a rock just before the canyon and plunges into the darkness of the canyon.”I survived,”I thought,”I survived. Is this good enough?

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  20. Please reply if you think my stories great. Sorry if I bothered you! I love your books and someday I want to be an author too, so please respond if you think the ending to this story is good. I’m only saying this because when I submitted my ending to the story I forgot to hit “replies to my comments” and I don’t know how to change that. I really really really really don’t mean to bother you. Your awesome! Bye!

  21. I raced down the road panicking. My heart was beating faster and faster. The dog sounds were getting louder and louder. I had no idea how long this would go on. Suddenly a huge wall stood in my way. I hadn’t noticed it because I was too scared the headless man was going to catch me. My board wouldn’t stop. It was like the headless skateboarder was controlling my skateboard, or not letting me stop. I tried to think of what to do. Finally it hit me, I had to jump. I leaped high into the foggy dark sky and landed in a bush. I watched as my favorite skateboard and the monster collided into the wall. I knew it was the end. I walked home with only a few bumps and bruises. At least it was all over.

    1. Wow! A really excellent ending. There is an actual scene of me and a wall in my fifth book. I think you’ll like it!

  22. I ran into a house. There was a kid playing Minecraft on the Xbox 360 with “LibraryWarrior1” and “LibraryWarrior2″. The kid’s name was Kelly. She invited me in. Then the headless horseman skater ran in. He ran and destroyed the TV. He walked out and said,”I’m sorry! Bye now!” So I became friends with Kelly and we played Minecraft together.

    THE END

  23. I raced home with him only feet behind me I reach my house just in time. later that night … lightning flashed it was the dude with no head ! Every thing went black…

  24. It came to a stop in front of me, and I realized that someone had put a department store manikin on the skateboard then sent it rolling down the hill. I looked around until I saw a piece of brown cloth sticking out from behind a bush. “______” I yelled. “Halloween isn’t until tomorrow!”

  25. Mabey the kids head falls off it is kind of gross🆘😂😅😂😅😅😅😈😈😎😎😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😒😒😒😒😒😒

  26. all of a sudden the man started to ride down the hill. the race was on! 5min. without him getting close then wham no head!!!!

  27. I called out “who’s there” then it went silent and the thing called out “I am
    a zombie, the last of my kind and I am hungry!! I want to eat your brains”.
    Then the thing started rolling down the path and I started moving on my
    skateboard as fast as I could… then a werewolf came out of nowhere,
    I went to the left and dodged it. Then the werewolf and the zombie
    said “ha ha ha ha ha ha ha got you” and I said “Brian and Jack it was you”, then they responded “we tricked you”. Then I said “you were wearing costumes – I’M GONNA CHASE YOU NOW” and I chased them all the way home.

  28. Then a baboon jumped out of nowhere and said ” hey whats your problem go to bed son” Then the man without the head burst out in tears and went to bed

    1. But he has no head how would he suck it?

  29. Suddenly, I gasped and everything went quiet. I think I had saw the demon move. I quickly ran to the nearest tree and hid behind it without moving a muscle. This time, the demon had definitely moved. I was positive. Then, the demon disappeared. I ran home. When I got home, there was something weird. No one was home and there was a ghostly light floating in the air. I felt a gust of cold air. Had this have something to do with the demon I saw earlier?

  30. you are the best person on earth and your books are awesome!!!!!!!!!! And I love the funny storys that you make.

    1. I am definitely NOT the best person on earth. I bet there are at least two people in Brazil who are better! (haha)

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