#2-“Double Wobbly” story

The “Double Wobbly” Story

Here’s the beginning of the story I wrote called “The Legend of Double Wobbly.”

Twilight had come down fast, darkening the steep roadway. I skated over the top of Ichabod Hill and rolled downward, picking up speed. I could hear dogs in faraway backyards barking and howling at the setting sun. Carving a tight line down the curving road, I shot downhill faster and faster, rapidly approaching the dangerous twists of Double Wobbly. Suddenly a wave of bad feeling came over me. It wasn’t fear exactly…more of a strange, demented sadness. I could not continue. I dug in, grinding my board to a stop.

Just at that moment the distant dogs went silent, and a nearby rasp of wheels on pavement caught my ear. I looked uphill. There, concealed in a shadow cast by a dark cloud, a towering figure stood on a glowing skateboard.

My hair rose in terror. Was it the demon of Double Wobbly? Could I outrace this evil? I was fast on my board…but was I fast enough?

At that moment the cloud moved away, and I could see my pursuer.

My heart went cold. The dude on the skateboard had no head!

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Comments from my Readers & Friends

  1. It came to a stop in front of me, and I realized that someone had put a department store manikin on the skateboard then sent it rolling down the hill. I looked around until I saw a piece of brown cloth sticking out from behind a bush. “______” I yelled. “Halloween isn’t until tomorrow!”

  2. Mabey the kids head falls off it is kind of gross🆘😂😅😂😅😅😅😈😈😎😎😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😒😒😒😒😒😒

  3. all of a sudden the man started to ride down the hill. the race was on! 5min. without him getting close then wham no head!!!!

  4. I called out “who’s there” then it went silent and the thing called out “I am
    a zombie, the last of my kind and I am hungry!! I want to eat your brains”.
    Then the thing started rolling down the path and I started moving on my
    skateboard as fast as I could… then a werewolf came out of nowhere,
    I went to the left and dodged it. Then the werewolf and the zombie
    said “ha ha ha ha ha ha ha got you” and I said “Brian and Jack it was you”, then they responded “we tricked you”. Then I said “you were wearing costumes – I’M GONNA CHASE YOU NOW” and I chased them all the way home.

  5. Then a baboon jumped out of nowhere and said ” hey whats your problem go to bed son” Then the man without the head burst out in tears and went to bed

  6. Suddenly, I gasped and everything went quiet. I think I had saw the demon move. I quickly ran to the nearest tree and hid behind it without moving a muscle. This time, the demon had definitely moved. I was positive. Then, the demon disappeared. I ran home. When I got home, there was something weird. No one was home and there was a ghostly light floating in the air. I felt a gust of cold air. Had this have something to do with the demon I saw earlier?

  7. Suddenly the dogs stopped barking, the man seemed to be trying to communicate with me but I could not understand him. I did not blame him for it because he had no head.
    Then he disappeared. A light appeared over my head. Suddenly he disappeared. A loud screeching noise blared through my ears. I fell to the ground, when I got up the dogs were barking again it was almost as if nothing had happened.
    When I got home the lights were off in my house.
    “Hello?” I said.
    “Hellloooooo!!!!” I yelled.
    Some body was coming, it was mom.
    She said,”Honey, what are you doing at 12 :30 at night with your skate board gear on?”

  8. Your books are the best when I got cool in a dule I couldn’t put that book down and finished it in one night I still love your books and read them + any other book I like I think cheesie Mack is now my favorite book ever!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh and he can’t see and never bother any one again and eat junk food. THE END OR IS IT?

  9. the instant i got ” Chessie Mack is cool in a duel” I started reading it. And, guess what! I finishes it in that day! so cool (;

  10. Dobbly Wobbly got zapped and became a spider and then got stepped on and died. Now he seeks his revenge using spider armies.