#2-“Double Wobbly” story

The “Double Wobbly” Story

Here’s the beginning of the story I wrote called “The Legend of Double Wobbly.”

Twilight had come down fast, darkening the steep roadway. I skated over the top of Ichabod Hill and rolled downward, picking up speed. I could hear dogs in faraway backyards barking and howling at the setting sun. Carving a tight line down the curving road, I shot downhill faster and faster, rapidly approaching the dangerous twists of Double Wobbly. Suddenly a wave of bad feeling came over me. It wasn’t fear exactly…more of a strange, demented sadness. I could not continue. I dug in, grinding my board to a stop.

Just at that moment the distant dogs went silent, and a nearby rasp of wheels on pavement caught my ear. I looked uphill. There, concealed in a shadow cast by a dark cloud, a towering figure stood on a glowing skateboard.

My hair rose in terror. Was it the demon of Double Wobbly? Could I outrace this evil? I was fast on my board…but was I fast enough?

At that moment the cloud moved away, and I could see my pursuer.

My heart went cold. The dude on the skateboard had no head!

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  1. As the headless dude comes closer, I hop on my skate board. OH NO! I realized that I was in front of the life threatening Double Wobbly skateboarding course! I turn to see the dude with no head about to grab me! I scream and with my eyes tight shut roll into the Double Wobbly course. Suddenly I’m rolling down the hill to certain death. I am surprised to see my legs take over! I do the Double Wobbly like a pro! A moment later the hills are behind me, and so is the headless dude! I think, what happened to the dude? I walk slowly back to the hills picking up a stick on the way( just in case ). AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!! The headless dude jumps out of nowhere. Instinctively I hit him with the stick. I miss! The stick hits the spot where the head should have been. Wait a minute ‘hit’? UUUURRRRGGGG!!!!,yelled the dude. He or should I say she, pulled off her invisible head mask, it was Lana! Boy was she mad. I just remembered it was Halloween! I apologized and we went off trick-or-treating happily ever after!
    THE END!

  2. I ran off, for it was too nauseous a feeling. But then I saw Rachel’s house. She had been killed skateboarding… at night, just past Ichabod Hill! I now had no doubt that it was because of the Headless Skateboarder. I needed to make the hill safe for future skateboarders!
    I went back, closed my eyes, and pulled his pants down. He shrieked, because his cupid and kiss underwear was so embarrassing. Before my eyes, he disintegrated into a fine rainbow colored dust! The dust had a sign in it that said: “This is candy.” I tasted a bit, and it was scrumptious! I ate the whole pile, and got such good skateboarding skills that I am going to college on a skateboarding scholarship.
    THE END

  3. It’s creepy. But I will put a skateboard on the top of the hill, go back down the hill and if double wobbly chase after me I’ll start running up the hill jump on top of skateboard and run down the hill and build a ramp and hide behind it and put a pool full of sharks on the target and when double wobbly gets on the ramp into the air. BOOM! He’s on the pool and the sharks eat him and I tell this to my friends and if they believe me they’ll cheer for me.

    • But I will put a stakeboard on the hill,go back down the hill and if double wobbly chase after me I’ll start running up the hill jump on top of stakeboard and run down the hill and build a ramp and hide behind it and put a pool full sharks and when double wobbly gets on the ramp into the air.

  4. I know how double wobbly got there double wobbly was a skater once and he went down that exact hill and he crashed and his head fell of and he died and his sprit doesent have a head either and cheesie Mack saw double wobbly’s sprit

  5. I was very weary and grimy after a long skateboarding from June 20 to July 1. When the terrible demon of Double Wobbly approached to me, I got an idea for its weakness: WHINING! So I whined, “THIS IS WHINING, YOU REVOLTING MONSTER! DO YOU KNOW WHAT WHINING IS?!?!” The terrifying demon finally yelled, “ME NO LIKE WHINING! I NO LIKE YOU WHEN YOU WHINING!” The demon was so iritated that it turned into dust.
    The End!

      • But that’s not all! Here’s the second part of the story: When the morning came, people found the pile of dust, so they called the construction workers to flatten it. At 9:00, the demon of Double Wobbly resurrected flatly like a pancake. When I skateboarded across that street, I saw that terrible demon’s skeleton and tried to lift it. That skeleton was so light to lift that I yelled “WHAT ON EARTH?!?!?!?!” to the universe. Now that’s what I call a crazy ending!

    • Great story! I put it down under so other people can see it. Cheesie should add it in the book. Great job!

      • I’ve got a story too! So when Cheesie was on his computer, it suddenly crashed. Cheesie was confused. It never used to shut down like that. But then the Doubly Wobbly monster appeared and said” You thought I was that easy to defeat? Well, you were wrong.” Then he attacked Cheesie and the rest was unknown.
        -TO BE CONTINUED

  6. i pumped my board harder and harder but he was on my tail. so i tried to turn and loose him he turned too. as if he knew i was going to do it !!. soon i out ran him. but right as i walked in my door he was standing there laughing hahahahaha!!
    i was soo scared. i tried to run but he grabed me pulled me inside
    he took off his mask it was …… GOON ARRG I WAS SOO MAD. she was in the lead in the point battle….. for now just you wait goon until i pull out my new zombie costume muhahahahahahhahahha

  7. I shivered, this time in fear. OMG.

    Then, “Gotcha!” It was June. She was using my invisible mask that makes it look like your head disappear. But, just then, I had a brilliant idea. I cackled, knowing it would earn me some points. Time to put my plan to action!

    I ripped off the mask, and just as I planned, June’s head as well. I won the Points Battle!

  8. The mysterious skateboarder revealed a dagger, and used it to chop off my own head. Then we became close friends. I still didn’t know his name… until he introduced himself as Kevin. I screamed and stabbed him. Then I went back to the place where he chopped my head off, glued it back on, and enjoyed life as a kid zombie. Yum, brains.

  9. the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldn’t see that he replaced my head with a pumpkin the not so very end

    • Neat idea. But if your head was on the boarder, then I think you’d be able to see…and maybe even your brain would now control his body. I don’t know…
      It’s your story.

  10. the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldnt see the he replaced my head with a pumpkin the end

  11. I felt as if I would die if I kept running. Finally I had to stop! My doom was coming closer and closer.
    Suddenly the dude reached up and PULLED OFF HIS HEAD!!! What was underneath was even more surprising. Georgie!!! “How do you like my Halloween costume Cheesie?” He said.
    I didn’t recover from the shock of the experience until Georgie apologized and my breathing was back to normal. I’m never going out after dark again!!!!!

  12. This story seems a little SCARY!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PLEASE REPLY, PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE [PLEASE]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  13. My heart raced as I threw my skateboard at the mysterious dude. Missed! My feet pounded on the pavement. I was running so fast I couldn’t see. I turned back and he wasne’t there!
    Had I outrun him?

    BAM! The figure crashed into me! “Get off me,twerp!”he yelled.

    IT WAS KEVIN!!! What Kevin did was cheating, so I won the duel!

    The End