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The “Double Wobbly” Story

Here’s the beginning of the story I wrote called “The Legend of Double Wobbly.”

Twilight had come down fast, darkening the steep roadway. I skated over the top of Ichabod Hill and rolled downward, picking up speed. I could hear dogs in faraway backyards barking and howling at the setting sun. Carving a tight line down the curving road, I shot downhill faster and faster, rapidly approaching the dangerous twists of Double Illustration of a towering figure on a glowing skateboardWobbly. Suddenly a wave of bad feeling came over me. It wasn’t fear exactly…more of a strange, demented sadness. I could not continue. I dug in, grinding my board to a stop.

Just at that moment the distant dogs went silent, and a nearby rasp of wheels on pavement caught my ear. I looked uphill. There, concealed in a shadow cast by a dark cloud, a towering figure stood on a glowing skateboard.

My hair rose in terror. Was it the demon of Double Wobbly? Could I outrace this evil? I was fast on my board…but was I fast enough?

At that moment the cloud moved away, and I could see my pursuer.

My heart went cold. The dude on the skateboard had no head!

I don’t know what comes next. If you have an idea, go for it! Write it up below.

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  4. Suddenly the dogs stopped barking, the man seemed to be trying to communicate with me but I could not understand him. I did not blame him for it because he had no head.
    Then he disappeared. A light appeared over my head. Suddenly he disappeared. A loud screeching noise blared through my ears. I fell to the ground, when I got up the dogs were barking again it was almost as if nothing had happened.
    When I got home the lights were off in my house.
    “Hello?” I said.
    “Hellloooooo!!!!” I yelled.
    Some body was coming, it was mom.
    She said,”Honey, what are you doing at 12 :30 at night with your skate board gear on?”

  5. Your books are the best when I got cool in a dule I couldn’t put that book down and finished it in one night I still love your books and read them + any other book I like I think cheesie Mack is now my favorite book ever!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh and he can’t see and never bother any one again and eat junk food. THE END OR IS IT?

    2. I just put a bunch of books together until the pages were eight inches wide and it came to 1276 pages. I think you are exaggerating about the three days.

  7. the instant i got ” Chessie Mack is cool in a duel” I started reading it. And, guess what! I finishes it in that day! so cool (;

  9. Dobbly Wobbly got zapped and became a spider and then got stepped on and died. Now he seeks his revenge using spider armies.

  12. As the headless dude comes closer, I hop on my skate board. OH NO! I realized that I was in front of the life threatening Double Wobbly skateboarding course! I turn to see the dude with no head about to grab me! I scream and with my eyes tight shut roll into the Double Wobbly course. Suddenly I’m rolling down the hill to certain death. I am surprised to see my legs take over! I do the Double Wobbly like a pro! A moment later the hills are behind me, and so is the headless dude! I think, what happened to the dude? I walk slowly back to the hills picking up a stick on the way( just in case ). AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!! The headless dude jumps out of nowhere. Instinctively I hit him with the stick. I miss! The stick hits the spot where the head should have been. Wait a minute ‘hit’? UUUURRRRGGGG!!!!,yelled the dude. He or should I say she, pulled off her invisible head mask, it was Lana! Boy was she mad. I just remembered it was Halloween! I apologized and we went off trick-or-treating happily ever after!
    THE END!

  13. I ran off, for it was too nauseous a feeling. But then I saw Rachel’s house. She had been killed skateboarding… at night, just past Ichabod Hill! I now had no doubt that it was because of the Headless Skateboarder. I needed to make the hill safe for future skateboarders!
    I went back, closed my eyes, and pulled his pants down. He shrieked, because his cupid and kiss underwear was so embarrassing. Before my eyes, he disintegrated into a fine rainbow colored dust! The dust had a sign in it that said: “This is candy.” I tasted a bit, and it was scrumptious! I ate the whole pile, and got such good skateboarding skills that I am going to college on a skateboarding scholarship.
    THE END

    1. That’s very HILARIOUS! I laughed at the part when the Headless Skateboarder was embarrassed by his underwear.

  14. It’s creepy. But I will put a skateboard on the top of the hill, go back down the hill and if double wobbly chase after me I’ll start running up the hill jump on top of skateboard and run down the hill and build a ramp and hide behind it and put a pool full of sharks on the target and when double wobbly gets on the ramp into the air. BOOM! He’s on the pool and the sharks eat him and I tell this to my friends and if they believe me they’ll cheer for me.

    1. But I will put a stakeboard on the hill,go back down the hill and if double wobbly chase after me I’ll start running up the hill jump on top of stakeboard and run down the hill and build a ramp and hide behind it and put a pool full sharks and when double wobbly gets on the ramp into the air.

  16. I know how double wobbly got there double wobbly was a skater once and he went down that exact hill and he crashed and his head fell of and he died and his sprit doesent have a head either and cheesie Mack saw double wobbly’s sprit

  19. I was very weary and grimy after a long skateboarding from June 20 to July 1. When the terrible demon of Double Wobbly approached to me, I got an idea for its weakness: WHINING! So I whined, “THIS IS WHINING, YOU REVOLTING MONSTER! DO YOU KNOW WHAT WHINING IS?!?!” The terrifying demon finally yelled, “ME NO LIKE WHINING! I NO LIKE YOU WHEN YOU WHINING!” The demon was so iritated that it turned into dust.
    The End!

    2. But that’s not all! Here’s the second part of the story: When the morning came, people found the pile of dust, so they called the construction workers to flatten it. At 9:00, the demon of Double Wobbly resurrected flatly like a pancake. When I skateboarded across that street, I saw that terrible demon’s skeleton and tried to lift it. That skeleton was so light to lift that I yelled “WHAT ON EARTH?!?!?!?!” to the universe. Now that’s what I call a crazy ending!

    5. Great story! I put it down under so other people can see it. Cheesie should add it in the book. Great job!

    6. I’ve got a story too! So when Cheesie was on his computer, it suddenly crashed. Cheesie was confused. It never used to shut down like that. But then the Doubly Wobbly monster appeared and said” You thought I was that easy to defeat? Well, you were wrong.” Then he attacked Cheesie and the rest was unknown.
      -TO BE CONTINUED

  21. i pumped my board harder and harder but he was on my tail. so i tried to turn and loose him he turned too. as if he knew i was going to do it !!. soon i out ran him. but right as i walked in my door he was standing there laughing hahahahaha!!
    i was soo scared. i tried to run but he grabed me pulled me inside
    he took off his mask it was …… GOON ARRG I WAS SOO MAD. she was in the lead in the point battle….. for now just you wait goon until i pull out my new zombie costume muhahahahahahhahahha

  22. I shivered, this time in fear. OMG.

    Then, “Gotcha!” It was June. She was using my invisible mask that makes it look like your head disappear. But, just then, I had a brilliant idea. I cackled, knowing it would earn me some points. Time to put my plan to action!

    I ripped off the mask, and just as I planned, June’s head as well. I won the Points Battle!

  23. The mysterious skateboarder revealed a dagger, and used it to chop off my own head. Then we became close friends. I still didn’t know his name… until he introduced himself as Kevin. I screamed and stabbed him. Then I went back to the place where he chopped my head off, glued it back on, and enjoyed life as a kid zombie. Yum, brains.

    1. That is so-o-o gory…and really terrific. I think turning into a zombie is a neat twist!

  24. the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldn’t see that he replaced my head with a pumpkin the not so very end

    1. Neat idea. But if your head was on the boarder, then I think you’d be able to see…and maybe even your brain would now control his body. I don’t know…
      It’s your story.

  25. the dude skated over and challenged me to see who is the best skateboarder.I accepted his challenge.

  26. the headless boarder picked me up and took my head and put it on himself i couldnt see the he replaced my head with a pumpkin the end

    2. I have a friend named Noah and he is very polite. And I know where he lives because were friends. You might be that Noah. Anyway, cool name! And I agree! Cheesie Mack is a great website!

  28. I felt as if I would die if I kept running. Finally I had to stop! My doom was coming closer and closer.
    Suddenly the dude reached up and PULLED OFF HIS HEAD!!! What was underneath was even more surprising. Georgie!!! “How do you like my Halloween costume Cheesie?” He said.
    I didn’t recover from the shock of the experience until Georgie apologized and my breathing was back to normal. I’m never going out after dark again!!!!!

    3. That is weird. I put kittens in book #4! How did you know?
      Bob the Builder? No way. It’s for toddlers.

  29. This story seems a little SCARY!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PLEASE REPLY, PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE [PLEASE]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  30. My heart raced as I threw my skateboard at the mysterious dude. Missed! My feet pounded on the pavement. I was running so fast I couldn’t see. I turned back and he wasne’t there!
    Had I outrun him?

    BAM! The figure crashed into me! “Get off me,twerp!”he yelled.

    IT WAS KEVIN!!! What Kevin did was cheating, so I won the duel!

    The End

  31. I ran for my life.He was getting closer………AND closer……….I ran around the corner untillllllllllll…………………….BAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMM. All the sudden guy with no head crashes into me…..and then I blacked out

  32. I was petrified at that moment, I didn’t know what to do, I thought fast, then, I had a good idea, I don’t know if it will work, but at least it might stall him. I tripped him by the wheels and then he went flying into the air. He did a somersault and landed on to the top of the tree. I then told everyone in the camp with a megaphone (don’t ask why because found it lying on the floor) and I said, ” OH MY CHEESE DOODLES, ITS DOUBLE WOBBLY!!!” so then everyone (except for Goon) came out and started laughing. Why? Because Double Wobbly was falling from the tree and landed straight into a frozen pool of water. Then, the water tuned into ice cream. Everyone was happy and stuffed themselves with ice cream. Finally, everyone in cabin H cheered for Cheesie and then Cheesie won the cool duel.

  34. My heart practically pounded out of my chest. I ran as fast as my legs would take me. Suddenly he whooshed by me and reached out his ugly hands. Then he ripped of his neck revealing it was Goon. She had her head under a towel. But i got my revenge, because i had called the police and won the points game. Yahoo!

  35. I run. Faster than I ever went. But he chases me. And the wind whooshes away the clothing to reveal… Goon! She had a head, just tucked under the cloth. She let out a haughty laugh. I’d get revenge, I thought. And I did. I did.

    1. I started to sprint away, then I threw my board to the ground to move away… I fell. It caught up to me!
      I wake up in bed in cold sweat, I open my door to go downstairs, OH MY GOD! THE HEADLESS RIDER IS THERE IN MY HALLWAY!
      I wake up yet again, I’m scared I roll over to see… THE HEADLESS SKATEBOARD RIDER!

  37. Terror gripped my heart, as I jerked the board to the right. Bad move. It slipped from underneath, and I fell off, tumbling like a tumbleweed in the wind. Scrambling up, I started running back up the street. I didn’t dare look back, but I could feel “it’s” presence. I thought it was floating, like a ghost, but I knew that wasn’t the case.
    “It’s board must be superb!” I thought dreamily, then snapped back into the harsh reality I was facing. This was a completely on adrenaline. My house came into view. Time slowed down. Everything was a blur. My eyes narrowed onto the white door that looked slightly ajar. I can make it! I know I can!
    Suddenly, I woke up to Goon screaming her head off, head completely red. I stared at her, for a second. It was as if the adrenaline hadn’t died down in me, and in a split second, I threw a pillow at her. And, for some weird reason, I was wishing that I was still running from the demon of Double Wobbly. Sighing, I threw myself back onto my bed, as I tried ever hard to get the dream back. It never did… Or did it..?

    2. Whoa, Karthy! That is so great! You should keep writing because you have lots of talent for this.

  38. I think u should put a part where the army tries to catch him and he scares them to death. Yoaur books are awesome.

  40. I tried to run , but I couldn’t because he held me there with his mind.I was very scarared(scared + scared). He started to strangle me. I was kidding about that, he just pulled me closer. He took out a jack hammer,and tried to hit me.Turns out we were in the middle of a road.The car hit him and blew him into smitherines and was about to hit me, but instead it went through me. I went home and found out the demon had turned me into a ghost.

  41. Okay, that’s not exactly true. He had a head, but it was hidden by his black hood. He pulled it off, and it was…Kevin Welch!

  43. Wow, I think I just saw the Headless Hombie,

    * * *
    So I was at school I told all my friends they thought I was kidding about seeing the Headless Hombie, Well…
    I wasn’t (Woo Hoo 😒) Time for social study’s class, and then science that was done at: 9:40am and my school starts at: 5:00! 😱

    1. Here’s the rest of it:
      The bell rang, After school I walked home.
      The next day on T.V I watched the news I heard that some one killed the the headless Hombie I was happy. That’s all Chiesie Mack I think u should put that in with izzy’s part ok please hopefully that happens
      Tell me if it’s a yes or no when u get to it!

  44. Oh jeez, I thought as I saw the Headless Homie (his name) approach me. I didn’t know what he was going to do. The legend says either he gives you the best boarding skills ever, or he curses your boards so that you feel sad whenever you try to board. My head was pounding as he got closer…and closer…and then ground his glowing board to a stop.
    “Sup dude,” he said, in a booming voice that came from where his mouth should have been. “Show me your best moves..or else.”
    At this point I was shaking. I didn’t know what to do. I hopped on my board and started away with a triple wheelie. He watched me as I did a flipskid and a 540-degree turn.
    Then I felt his icy breath on my back.
    “Rad, bro,” he said. “But can you do a double wobbly?”
    I heard what sounded like an owl. I was utterly confused and terrified. I grabbed the Headless Homie’s board and yelled, “Can so!” I didn’t know what a double wobbly was. I felt myself wiggling and flipping and skidding with the power of his board.
    “Now that was a double wobbly,” he said. He touched my board and it glowed. He took back his and disappeared into the night.
    Now I have awesome skateboarding powers, a glowing board….
    and no head. Just like….
    THE DEMON OF DOUBLE WOBBLY (scary music plays)
    –the end–

    1. Wow, Izzy…that is a terrific story. You are a really good writer. (And probably a pretty rad skater, too.)

  45. i think that the demon takes his skateboard and throws it at the guy, who’s name is jennifer lopez, and he gets his head chopped of while he farts in terror.

  47. I think he should barley escape and then everyone thinks hes crazy but then people go missing and then they belive him

  48. I grabbed my board and threw it at him, it smashed into his chest and knocked him right off his board!

    p.s who drew the picture?

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