Cheesie Mack

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Cheesie Mack is Not a Genius or Anything

Book 1 in the Cheesie Mack Series

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  2. Unusual grandparent nicknames.
  3. Countries with money that doesn’t break into hundredths.
  4. Guess what it will cost to mail a letter fifty years from now.
  5. Images of cool stamps and your made-up captions to go with them.
  6. Anything about frog and toad leg lengths.
  7. Excellent rodent jokes to add to my collection.
  8. Have you seen a vampire or, even better, been bitten by one?
  9. The answer to my puzzle: eighty-three cents in four U.S. coins.
  10. Cool words that sound like what they mean.
  11. Which three words is “skivolvunged” a combo of?
  12. Vote for your favorite food.
  13. How to toss things over your head backward with your toes.
  14. Other names for sow bugs… and my science report.
  15. What was the evidence in Goon’s pocket?
  16. Glenn Philips’ “a half of a time” explanation.
  17. Determining if Glenora Jean Prott was a Ms. or a Mrs.
  18. Cheesie’s and Georgie’s junk food presentation.
  19. Six U.S. pennies minted in 1909.
  20. The Harder/Bigger Word Game (THABIWOGA). [It doesn’t work. I’m a dud!]
  21. The title of my next book.
  22. Do you know why Eureka was dented into the paper in the envelope?
  23. All about my last birthday party… and tell me about yours.
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Cheesie Mack is Not a Genius or Anything

Book 1 in the Cheesie Mack Series

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Cheesie Mack is Not a Genius or AnythingThe original cover of this book—and Book 2—(both illustrated by Adam McCauley) have been replaced by new ones (illustrated by Douglas Holgate) because the people who publish my books thought my covers would look better with much bigger pictures of me. (Don’t start saying I’m conceited. It wasn’t my idea.)

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CHAPTER 2:
My Best Friend Screams

The phone call was from Georgie Sinkoff, my best friend.

“GET OVER HERE RIGHT NOW!” he screamed into my ear before I could finish saying hello. And then he hung up on me.

I ran outside, yelled to Mom where I was going, and sprinted into the gully behind my house, which is in Gloucester, Massachusetts, where I have lived my whole life.

If you don’t know where Massachusetts is, look in the upper right-hand corner of the United States.

I left Alaska out because it’s too big.

Mass (sometimes we call it that) is a small state.

Map of the US with a star on Massachusets

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Only six states are smaller. Even Hawaii is bigger, but it’s kind of cheating because lots of Hawaii is ocean. I have a U.S. map on my bedroom wall, and because I look at it every night before I turn out my light, I have almost memorized it.

Gloucester (people here say GLAH-stah… weird, huh?) is the oldest fishing port in America. It was founded in 1623, only three years after the Pilgrims landed at Plymouth Rock, which is also in Massachusetts somewhere. I have never seen Plymouth Rock, but rocks last almost forever, so I guess it’s still there.

Georgie and I live less than a mile from the Atlantic Ocean, in a neighborhood of big, old houses. Not old like Pilgrims, but Granpa says our house is older than he is, and I know he is way more than seventy. (He does not celebrate his birthday, and I don’t even know when it is. He won’t tell.)

Our houses are three blocks apart if you use the streets, but Georgie and I only go that way if we’re on our bikes. There’s a scrawny little stream in a scrawny little gully that separates our backyards, and it is so narrow that last year Georgie launched a balloon filled with chocolate pudding all the way from his bedroom window over the trees and the gully into my backyard, where my sister was playing with her friends.

I told you he has terrific ideas!

Of course I was in Georgie’s bedroom at the time, but on purpose here’s what I did not do:

  1. I did not fill the balloon with pudding.
  2. I did not touch Georgie’s huge slingshot.
  3. I did not help pull back the rubber part.

I did not do any of these things so that if Mom or someone asked, I would not have to lie. I did help aim it, kind of. When the pudding bomb landed and splashed chocolate on you-know-who, the girls screamed like the universe was exploding—and even though we got yelled at, it was cool.

Georgie launching a balloon filled with chocolate pudding all the way from his bedroom window over the trees and the gully into my backyard, onto my sister's head.

I trotted through the gully on the path that Georgie and I made, then up the other side and through the won’t-close-gate into his backyard. Once inside his back door—I never have to knock—I yelled for him. He yelled back from the basement.

I walked down the stairs. They creaked and squeaked like in horror movies. (I’m not trying to scare you—it’s just one of the details I remember.)

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His house, like mine, is really old. The basement and stairs are made out of wood, and the floor is mostly dirt except for the concrete part where Mr. Sinkoff keeps his tools.

I could see a shadow moving on the basement floor, so I knew Georgie was directly beneath me, under the stairs. When I reached the bottom, Georgie stepped out and grabbed me, talking real fast.

“I found something big! Really big!”

There were cobwebs in his hair. He had one hand behind his back.

I have known Georgie my whole life. We have always been best friends… except for the time in third grade when he called me Dumbo Ears. (This is really the last time I am going to mention my ears!)

GeorgieGeorgie has reddish-brown hair, greenish-brown eyes, braces, and really cool glasses with bright red rims. He is already eleven and is almost twice my size. He is good at games where being big is an advantage, like basketball and football. My best sports are soccer and baseball because I am wicked fast and very excellent at catching flies.

I have brown hair, brown eyes, and a whitish scar on my thumb where a fishhook stabbed me when I was on a lake with my dad. I was eight and fooling around. Don’t ask.Cheesie

Georgie and I go to the same school, have always had the same teacher, and in the summer, always go to camp in Maine.

“I was down here looking for black widow spiders,” Georgie continued. “I figured if I caught one in a jar, we could use it to scare your sister. But this”—

Georgie brought his arm around and held up a yellowed envelope with one corner ripped off—”was completely hidden between those two boards.” He pointed under the stairs, but I took my eyes off the envelope for only a second. “It’s addressed to my house, but the name is”—he squinted at the envelope—”G. J. Prott.”

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“Probably there was somebody named G. J. Prott who lived here before you guys,” I said. Georgie nodded. “Look what was in the envelope!”

He held out a piece of paper folded up small, then opened it. Inside were a silvery metal heart on a silvery metal chain and one penny.

“A penny? Not exactly treasure, Georgie.”

“Yeah, but this necklace is probably real silver. And what if there’s more hidden stuff? Like gold and diamonds.”

I picked up the necklace and held it high between us. The lightbulb on the basement rafters was not very bright, but the heart sparkled as it spun slowly.

“I bet a hypnotist could use this to hypnotize people,” I said.

Georgie didn’t say anything. Maybe I’d sort of hypnotized him.

I placed the heart necklace back on the paper in Georgie’s hand and examined the coin. The back looked a lot different from any other penny I’d ever seen, but the front had the same face on it: Abraham Lincoln, our sixteenth president.

(Glenn Philips, the smartest kid in my class, can name all the presidents and all the vice presidents. In order!)

I looked at the date on the coin. “This penny was made in 1909.”A really old penny! (From 1909)

That snapped Georgie out of his trance. He grabbed the penny and peered at it closely. “That means it’s over a hundred years old.”

One of us said, “Whoa.”

I don’t remember who.

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Read from Book Two: Cheesie Mack Is Cool In A Duel
Read from Book Three: Cheesie Mack Is Running Like Crazy!
Read from Book Four: Cheesie Mack Is Not Exactly Famous
Read from Book Five: Cheesie Mack Is Sort Of Freaked Out

Excerpt copyright © 2011 by Stephen L. Cotler. Illustrations copyright © 2011 by Adam McCauley. Published by Random House Children’s Books, a division of Random House, Inc., New York.

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Cheesie Mack is Not a Genius or Anything

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Random House

May 22, 2011

ISBN-10: 0375864377

ISBN-13: 9780375864377

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“Fifth-grader Ronald “Cheesie” Mack’s problems (like how to outsmart his evil older sister) may be ordinary, but in the hands of first-time author Cotler they’re plenty entertaining. Playful use of language. Many entertaining bit characters. Cotler blatantly sets readers up for Cheesie’s next adventure; after this installment, they’ll be ready for it.”

— Publishers Weekly

“Ronald “Cheesie” Mack and his best friend, Georgie, are about to graduate fifth grade and embark on the best summer ever. Readers will be happy to learn that Cotler’s debut is the first in a new series. Cheesie chattily narrates his own story; his voice rings true, and the other characters are a gently quirky, appealing lot. His periodic invitations to read posts on or add stories to the CheesieMack.com website will hook denizens of the digital generation.”

— Kirkus Reviews

“Ronald, aka Cheesie, Mack is looking forward to a summer of scheming with his best friend, Georgie, terrorizing his sister June “the Goon,” and finally attending camp with Georgie as cool older campers. [T]hen Georgie finds an old letter containing a century-old penny and a locket, a mystery that eventually leads the pals to the Haunted Toad, a local rundown mansion. This is Cheesie’s story, and his easygoing, accessible voice will certainly appeal to middle-grade readers. From the plot to unleash mouse madness at the school graduation to his obsession with besting his older sister, the action here is all fun and games.”

— Bulletin of the Center for Children's Books

“Ronald Mack—better known as “Cheesie”—is an almost-11-year-old with a knack for silliness and trouble. Cheesie’s best friend, Georgie, is with him every step of the way. When the boys find a mysterious envelope, they’re in for the adventure of a lifetime. [A] rollicking read.”

— School Library Journal

Comments from my Readers & Friends

  1. this is my favorite book in the world that i read this book 9 times already and i cant wait for book #2 to come out!!!!!!!! 🙂

  4. LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think this book is the best,when i first checked it out at my school library(greenbrier)i tought it would be boring but it totally rocked!and i cant wait to read the new one!…………..LOVE THIS BOOK!

  5. Hey Cheesie! I loved your book so much, I just finished reading it today! I just wanted to say Hi. I have a great way to get back at your mean sister, Goob! While she’s sleeping you should fill her hand up with shaving cream and then tickle her her nose with a feather, when she scratches her nise, she’ll be covered in shaving cream! Isn’t that funny? You should do that to Goob in your next book, oh I’d really love if you did! Say hi to Georgie for me! Bye, and thanks!

  9. hey cheesie tell that vampire that he can suck all the blood he wants but not us humans!
    p.s. hey monster! stay away from us humans or i got some light!

    1. yeah that is true but, don’t get to hipped up niaimah5! and ur my god-sister and ur 5 and i am 8 so don’t go that far with g.j. prott, cheesie, and me!

  13. Hey Chesie mack!!! I love your book because it a swirl of excitement, friendship and adventures!!! It is much different from other books because it uses such incredible words!!

    1. You are very good with words, too! I think “swirl of excitement, friendship and adventures” is a very terrific way to describe my book. Thanks!

    1. Have your teacher or principal contact me and maybe I’ll come to your school next year.

  20. hi my name is madison maelee howard and i just wanted to say i liked your book alot and i hope my grandma will buy me the next book in june

    1. I am laney i am 11 too.I am a big fan. I cant what for your second book to come out. I love your wrighting so much.Plese wight back. From laney. oh and ps. it is laney with a y. cheeise mack. Oh and a nother thing i think you are cute so cute. WRIGHT BACK PLESE AND THINK YOU.

    2. Thanks, Tamar & Laney. I can’t wait for my second book to come out, either. But only one more month now! It comes out in June.

  25. Hi. U came to my school and read a chapter, but I couldn’t find it when I read the whole book on my kindle fire. Harumph. It was a good book though. Speaking about made up words, the computer says harumph is made up. LOL.

    1. That’s impossible. Everything I read was in the book and the book is on your Kindle. Weird.
      Harumph!

  32. Hi Cheesie! (Steve Cotler). I am a librarian and I thank you for a book that boys and girls are loving to read. Glad book 2 is coming out this summer. Hurrah!

    1. Thanks, Axl! I was actually thinking of titling my book Cheesie Mack and the Haunted Toad because I liked the Haunted Toad so much..

  46. did you know…………………………. you will never know bwahahahahahaha you would’ve guessed wit my name

  47. We really enoyed your book during our read aloud time. It is AWESOME!!

    1. Hi, Mr. Bartz and all his third-graders:
      I am really glad you liked my book. I did a search of Mr. Bartz’s name and figured out that your school is Northview. Next week I going to be visiting schools in Michigan…on the other side of Lake Michigan from you. Maybe I could come to your school someday.

  48. story:
    who knows how i got here.A day in the park then complete pitch black.It is too hard to move all i know is that someone is after me and i don’t know why.I try to tell myself i can get out of this but all i can think is my mom will kill me if i am not back at seven.well it doesn’t really matter i probably won’t make it.the door creaks open i pretend to be asleep “look at him way too easy let’s put him in the box the boss wants him in reno in two days” a mysterious man says.one thought goes in my mind RENO WHAT WHY RENO WHO WANTS ME.i will not have myself go to reno.so i did what any kid would do (if you are think kick their butts.well your wrong but that is a better idea then shrieking AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!)i convenietly had a pocket knife in my pocket so i cut the rope i grabbed the clossest thing that was there a basebal bat i swung it at the first guy he got knocked out the second guy lunged towards me but i hit him in the chest he was down.A sharp pain hit my shoulder it was unbearable.the i woke up with my sister pinching my shoulder yelling GET UP.then things were back to the same boring reality big bummer.

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